and the facts of matter
got failing for me
since the day I saw her..
Everything is bright
and night so dear;
Songs interest me
now more than ever
Those talking eyes
with a sprinkle of glitter;
appears as if
the sea is so near
and a blary black
and wet strand of hair
that comes in between;
this is not fair! :-(
My heart boils
in the wetness of a tear
My love
please come some closer?
I pray to God
if she were here
in a deep sleep
with her head on my shoulder
I'm undecided,
to touch or stare;
or to get the time
freeze then and there
Rosy lips
with a glossy flare
and these pinkish cheeks
no crystal so clear
tempt me
and my hand changes gear
to explore and see
is this real or a mirror
but wait!
this'll surely litter
this masterpiece-
a moon without one wear..
Coming out of it
with a grin of solitaire
cherishing the dream
of open eyes and ear
But for one thing
I definitely want to cheer:
the lasting memories
of her mesmerizing glare........
4 comments:
good one.............keep on writing...........
Dude this poem is really amazing
I can't believe its written by u
Saruchi
Thanx people... for ur insights....
I wish If I had written this!!! Its amazing ..awesome.I liked it ..the most touching stanza for me is
"Those talking eyes
with a sprinkle of glitter;
appears as if
the sea is so near"
I remebered my gf after this !!!I wish if I could dedicated this for my gf.
Good keep it up.
I am waiting for more such poems from your side..
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