Today began
a new chapter
this day came
with a new laughter
Is this a rain
or I rode a roller coaster
or a joy in wain
and night forever..
or is this a gain
broad day after a long winter
that came as an airplane
a sort of a breather
the horses of my brain
run helter skelter
or should they follow a lane
like clouds in summer?
the day just slain
leads me to wonder
whether the time again
will lead me to falter
difficult to be sane
and all awake after
and catch this train
going faster and faster
I think of all the drains
to flush out my mind sugar
as I don't want the pain
to get to me any further
Is this a game
or a christmas shower
or whether a dead flame
is to catch a fire
Are you making me tame
to obey your order
or you've got into a chain
with me at the center?
We two are same
or do we differ;
or can I make you lame
and dance to my trigger?
Or you've got the shell
at the other side of the river
not letting you sail
and makes you wither..
Whomever to blame
whatever the pressure
let me tell you plain
that past is not a repeater
gone is that name
that litter clear
which got you to claim:
the night isn't over
Short by the pen
ditched by the paper
but piped to you man
the crux and the flavour
hope you frame
hope you figure
your real disdain
was just a stirrer:
and hope to see you again
with a renewed vigour
at least on the outer cane
which is your attire............
10 comments:
Nice Poem
A wonderful creation..
but as senior in this field ..
I can give u a suggestion that you can work upon the structuring of poem... eg. proper stanzas.. punctuations.. etc.. it will make your poems look even more attractive..
kya baat hai janab! seniorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr??????????
anyways.....abhi dil se likhi poem hai....jab time milega tab dimag lagayenge isme..
thanx anyways!
good one...dude!
dude......happy new year.....its awesome nd so creative unlike u.....ye sab mere naam ka effect hai......keep rocking......
this is the height of vellapan.......njoy......:)
@Saruchi, Puneet: Thanx for spending time on this.. :)
@Kavita: ya kandy....m not creative....
its the bench !!
mujhe believe karna thoda mushkil lag rha hai dat u hv written this poem
Very good job(if u hv done this
)
bench pe baithne ka kuch to fayada hua..
I hope ki vo log(will not mention names here)bhi teri sentu poems padhen aur tujh pe sentu ho jayen!!!.....:)
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