The roads, which we crossed;
The lanes, in which we were lost;
Etched forever-
a stone souvenir.
The paths, on which we walked;
The grass, on which we strolled;
The boulevards, which we preened;
Perfectly figure,
in my mind's matter.
The walls, on which we leaned;
The windows, through which we squinted;
The stones, which we chaired;
So tight a capture,
by the ropes of desire.
The saucers, which we shared;
The servings, which we had;
The cup, together we held;
A deja-vu will fire,
in the life after..
The incenses, which we sensed;
The souls, through which we steered;
The melodies, crossing our four ears;
Comes real that laughter;
Yes, we're again here!
The attires, which we donned;
The words, which we uttered;
The weather, through which we sailed;
It's crystal clear;
I'm an avid dreamer!
The sunsets, which we witnessed;
The solitude, which we deliberated;
The fly-catcher, the silence which it broke;
Preserved with care,
to be handed over to the ulterior.
The gazes, which our eyes exchanged;
The touch, which drew us closer;
The warmth, which we created;
I'm always there;
Hope you don't flicker..
10 comments:
your best .. till date..
jus keep on improving..
classic :) , kya soch ke aisa mast likh leta hai yaar ?
@Gautam, Vaibhav: Thanx doston...chalo kisi front pe to improvement ho raha hai.. ;)
dhamkiiiiii de hai isliye comment dal rhi hu......
awesome wrk!!!!!!!!kahi to tumhara dimag chlta hai atleast....
padha nahi abhi tak maine, bas comment dalne k request pe comment kar raha hun..hehehheh :-P
BUT haan, IBM k wellagiri ne tujhe poet jarur bana diya hai.....
Fantastic man ... beautiful...
I m totally impressed....
My name is Priyabrat. I bumped on ut blog frm PGuy..
this is my blog
www.punk-priyabrata.blogspot.com
some posts of late have been a bit rustic .... i wish u happen to read my bests...
but undoubtedly.. this is worth a piece 'moments to cherish '
u could give it a tune.. did u mean a song by this or jus a poem !!
@juhi, samrat- kyo fasa rahe ho mere ko logon...... maine kab bola???
@Priyabrata- Thank u for ur invaluable comments dude....just a poem as it was meant to be, but u've given me this idea...searching for a tune and chords now! ;)
Kaha se copy mara hai sab
Really fantastic if u hav written the same by ur own
I dont know that u r such a great poet or else such a great writer
Keep on improving
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