winning a war i've never learnt
its one-third life getting over..
getting at par i've everytime dreamt
its second by second pulling closer
using my fingers i've always burnt
its drop by drop getting away
cracking my head i've left unused
its debasing night after day
gauging my drift i'm here amused
what count is this U-turn
whisking the surroundings that sound diffused
what is the interpretation
trying trying trying as i pretend to do
what draws me to the center of a twister
vying for the aura i ought to woo
what slips in the end by a whisker
dying to pen the thoughts I want to poo
that sway from here to there
itching to bridle those awry clouds
I fear I'll give up in my chair..
7 comments:
It seems u r sweating it out.. at MBA..
I had told.. u it's a dangerous territory..
anyways.. u wrote sth different atleast..
inviting u to comment on my new poem..
Amazing.. y don't you put a short summary or a context in the beiginning or in the end ..
Where are you pursuing your MBA ..
I am in the same sail buddy (XIMB) :)
hi Priyabrat.. thanx for that..
btw, i'm in Nirma.. i know some people in ximb, just add me on gmail... paekut@gmail.com ..
awesome buddy..keep it up :)
Thats a beautiful poem! kudos!
nice and fresh
do read mine
www.shayar4u4ever.blogspot.com
My Infatuation Love Demystified
Regards,
Amit
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